The Wind and the Sun (3)

Do you usually compare yourself or compete with other people? Why or why not?It wasn't really hard to understand your essay. However, we gave you some corrections and suggestions that will help you improve more. We also think that if you would learn more English words and expressions, you essays will become better. So just keep your eagerness to learn more and never stop believing in yourself. Because we definitely believe in you.Yes, I think I did that for a long time before. But I don't do it anymore. I'm satisfied with my current life, and I always try to have confidence whe..........

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